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The Gift
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
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Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 01:11:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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He came to me
was here last night
held me hand
swore it would be alright.
With soft spoken words
and deep trust in his eyes
he spoke of a place
where serenity lies.
Promising to help
guide the way
said he'd be back
for a visit today.
I finally spoke up
for I desired it bad
my soul was aching
for this peace he had.
With such a beautiful gift
I asked why to me he came
he replied, "I am your angel
and Death is my name."
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2003-12-10 01:11:59]
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Re: The Gift
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 01:32:14 AM AEST
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wow this is a very touching yet gives you a eerie feeling kind of poem.. I really liked it alot
great job!!
Peace, Joy and HOpe
JENNA |
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Re: The Gift
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by Jeff9Man on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 04:31:50 AM AEST
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| very good. I like the darkness about it. sort of a suprise ending. |
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Re: The Gift
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 06:25:58 AM AEST
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Work like this is why I love poetry. Dark and creative.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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