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My Eyes
Contributed by
misstressdistrubed
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Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:59:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My eyes trun cold against the moon
In darkness I find myself soon
My hands tremble with the wind
I cant seem to find myself again
My eyes trun red with the sun
The light has now begain
Steady breaths from my chest
All I see everywhere is loneliness
My eyes are balcken by the fears
I sit alone and no one cares
Do they understand me at all
How with one trip so deeply I fall
My eyes are brighten by the day
And my words they seem to say
That life is worth the chalenge
And I will rise through my sufrage
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Re: My Eyes
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 01:48:43 AM AEST
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This is a very good expression of your saddness I hope you are feeling better.. I especially like the last line its very true.. things always get better there is always hope
peace, joy and hope
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Re: My Eyes
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 03:03:37 AM AEST
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I tottally agree with Jenna.
Great work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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