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Impressions
Contributed by
Baronhawk
on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:35:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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life
a fleeting dream
it flits
and flitters for a while
a faint
and vanishing whisper
scattered
by the breezy sky
memories
are not forever
it fades
and fails with time
footsteps
on sandy beaches
washed
by the waving tide
hope
is an illusion
it shrouds
and shadows existance
blinkers
enshrouding vision
eyelids
on unopened eyes
dreams
are but obstructions
that blocks
a restful slumber
boulders
raining from the heavens
burdens
on heavy shoulders
love
is an affliction
a disease
that leads to sorrow
a cancer
to a heart's emotion
a sickness
that bleeds the marrows
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2003-12-09 17:35:37]
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Re: Impressions
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:44:27 PM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! This was marvelous!
So few words spoken with much meaning and grace....your reader couldn't possibly miss the meaning face to face! Deeply thought through and through,,,I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, and you! My favorite part BaronHawk was the boulder....what a great way of putting it. "Boulders" I've felt that way many times...where do you go to hide when Boulders are raining from the sky?
Roses
ConSue
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Re: Impressions
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by amandajean on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:46:05 PM AEST
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| WOW is all I have to say that was awesome! |
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Re: Impressions
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:49:29 PM AEST
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Wow, simply wow.
I loved it.
Kie |
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