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Goodbye
Contributed by
amandajean
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Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:29:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You are there.
I am here.
What is left to say?
We have walked a path,
You made your choice.
I know you lost your way.
What is hell?
What is life?
Are they but one in the same?
My thoughts are formed,
My choice thought out,
I forced myself to forget your name.
Love is a torture.
Love is untamed.
So is it good or bad?
Save your words and flattery.
It is nothing but a waste!
Clearly you lost the good you had.
So who are you?
And who am I?
Look at what we became.
You say you figured me out,
Then tell me who I am.
My broken heart your only claim.
Our time is finished!
This must be stopped!
So say goodbye to what we had.
A cold world awaits us.
Erase the past it is long gone,
And once more I say goodbye to what we had!
Copyright ©
amandajean
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2003-12-09 17:29:50]
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Re: Goodbye
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:48:23 PM AEST
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FANTASTIC....This poem is well written, and Wow what a "thinker:" it is. Poses many questions which is always good, and I really appreciated the way you put it too!
Wonderful thought provoking poem.
Did you mean it?
Love,
ConSue
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Re: Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:51:31 PM AEST
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| great pem, keep it up. |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 07:22:41 PM AEST
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| I said I wasn't going to comment right now but this spoke right to me.... I loved how you wrote it.... Kinda hurts to see the words though. |
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