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You stupid person
Contributed by
starcheat
on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 04:45:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Friends forever
Is what I thought we ‘d be
But that all changed when you
Left for somebody else but me
Oh! What you became to be
Is what I don’t really don’t understand
So badly I hope you’ll become someday
A person no one will want to see
How cruel you became
What a liar you backstabber
I will never forget the days
When you were so forbidding to me
Those ugly horrifying weeks
When you left me in no peace
God, I hope someday
For such brutality you pay
You don’t deserve a world like this
A place of beautifulness and happiness
I’ll tell you what you deserve
A place of gloomy shadows
A place where witches live
Who shall eat you up one day
I am glad I left you before it was to late
Because I have finally found a
Friend much better than you.
Copyright ©
starcheat
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2003-12-09 16:45:18]
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Re: You stupid person
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by MissLee on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 04:48:02 PM AEST
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| Wow..that hit home for me...sniff...good job kiddo. |
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Re: You stupid person
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by amandajean on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:39:17 PM AEST
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| This was an excellent poem. I loved all the emotion! |
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Re: You stupid person
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:59:02 PM AEST
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Lots of anger & emotion in this poem. You were very effective in expressing it.
Kie |
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