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CONFUSED
Contributed by
MissLee
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Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 04:43:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I am so mad at you for what you said
It goes around and around in my head
Yet I am the one who feels bad
And you are the one who seems the most mad
I told you the truth and then
I told it again
The first time was the truth of how I felt
The second was telling you of the pain to me you have delt
I want to be with you still
But I never will
And yet I am so mad I do not even want to think of you
I am sorry for what I did do
But why did you have to break my heart
For I loved you since the start
I want to cry and shout
And let it all out
Yet I want to look into your eyes
And apologize
I want to let you know
How much you make my love grow
I feel so confused
And somewhat abused
Copyright ©
MissLee
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2003-12-09 16:43:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: CONFUSED
(User Rating: 1 ) by SensitiveSoAbused on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 07:11:11 PM AEST (User
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...I have this feeling I should step aside...
You still seem pretty enamoured with him...
probably don't need any extra emotions...
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Re: CONFUSED
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 10:22:24 PM AEST (User
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It was on such a day, when one came to play, that two hearts beat as one. True words were spoken and given in token as a promise to be fulfilled.
On this day, I have to say, my words still ring loud and true. My heart is heavy, my soul is wounded, and I am in dismay. Were the words you uttered merely muttered as to be taken in play.
Such silence now is all I have, not a word from you comes through. All I have are yesterdays words, I read them when I'm lost.
They comfort me and for a time allow memory to be the world I sought.. I wonder now, if somehow, to just be would be heaven sent. Or are those words of another day only ment to be, taken as in play.
I enjoyed your poem greatly, as you see, I have been where you were, and the poem lite a fire. I wonder still, and have come to see, the comfort in my memory. Thank you very much for sharing. |
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Re: CONFUSED
(User Rating: 1 ) by secretwind on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 11:49:23 PM AEST (User
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LOVE IS CONFUSING.....YOU EXPRESS THE MADDNESS WELL.
THE WIND...... |
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