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danger
Contributed by
darbysue59
on
Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 07:40:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Be still my heart,listen to me
hear me I say,he's not for you
come away,come away,there's danger there
danger in the kisses,that mingle in your
mind
Listen not,to those words whispered in
the night.
walk away,walk away take charge my
heart
beat not so fast,tremble so weak,listen
my heart,listen to me
Look long my heart,tred on I say,go
with the breezes that call in the night
soft wind of change,coming your way
breathe deep my heart,he's coming your
way,deep in the shadows,he waits for
me,be still my heart,listen to me
hear me I say,He's here for you
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2002-08-28 07:40:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: danger
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomsLDY on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 07:05:45 AM AEST (User
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This is a great write |
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Re: danger
(User Rating: 1 ) by darbysue59 on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 07:53:34 AM AEST (User
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thank you, i read a lot of these writes and i wish i had thought and written that,some really pretty poems wrote.along with several of yours,but i guess that's what makes us keep trying. i love to write,read,and read what others think of my work. even when they don't like it. i get that ok, i'll try harder attitude,that's when i can't think of a darn thing to say. thank you,carole |
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