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the ending
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 11:14:25 AM in AEST
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you'll search for more and never find a thing
the ending has come for me
i dont know what i was even thinking
cause im at mercys arms you see
no one visits anymore and im all alone
with my cliches
and negativity
let me drown in silence the way i want
this fire wont burn out in me
but this is the end
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2003-12-09 11:14:25]
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Re: the ending
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by MissLee on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 11:19:20 AM AEST
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| Very good, hope everything turns out allright in the end hon. |
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Re: the ending
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:12:24 PM AEST
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wow very great expression in this.. I hope you fnid what your looking for.. THerer is always HOpe..never give up
peace and joy
JENNA |
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Re: the ending
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by P0rNStAr on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 05:33:20 AM AEST
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First time i have read a poem of yours and im looking forward to reading the rest very nice right !
Love P* =P |
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Re: the ending
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by silent on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:58:27 AM AEST
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interesting write there, sad but definately got me thinking, thanks for sharing. Hope things are better for you now.
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