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The Importance of Woman
Contributed by
norm
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Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 10:28:24 AM in AEST
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Holiday Poetry
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I'd like to find a place somewhere
To live my life without a care,
Where weather comes on gentle lee,
To damage neither man nor tree.
Where breezy wafts massage the skin,
And heaven is a place within,
The noises from the city streets,
Are all replaced by ovine bleats-
Where ice and snow just do not know
To find a way nor how to go,
Where ne'er too cold or ne'er too hot,
Where love is blooming like as not.
Yet, now you hear the truth be told,
I care not if it's hot or cold,
I love a wench with sparkling eyes,
She thinks I'm great, so I surmise.
As long a she and I co-live,
All my love to her I give,
The weather is a minor plight,
For I am bundled thru the night..
Copyright ©
norm
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2003-12-09 10:28:24]
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Re: The Importance of Woman
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 11:11:35 AM AEST
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very sweet
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Re: The Importance of Woman
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by MissLee on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 11:21:10 AM AEST
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| Very nice but whats with the wench? ;) just jokin. |
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Re: The Importance of Woman
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by irshprnss on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 11:42:12 AM AEST
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Great write! This is beautiful!
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Re: The Importance of Woman
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by gee on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:14:53 PM AEST
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| Nice read! This place you are thinking about...at last look, the sign on the door read "No Vacancies". |
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Re: The Importance of Woman
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 01:09:02 PM AEST
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Norm, this poem was so sweet, cuddly and warm. I think you are thinking of a Paradise forlorn! What a nice tribute too, to your beautiful Shirl lady.....but did you have to ruin it by calling her "Wench" which of course will be replaced with a Wrench...and rightly so.....
A beautiful poem about love, and devotion, and you had to throw it to the sharks in the ocean, to be torn to bits because you used wench and not lady fair? Don't show this one to Shirl....unless you don't care, are you a unfeeling Teddy Bear? Geeeees, I never!!!!!
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Re: The Importance of Woman
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by norm on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 03:30:04 PM AEST
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In protest to those with wicked minds
the dictionary defines WENCH good
and bad..I am a nice fellow..I could
only mean WENCH in the nicest sense |
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Re: The Importance of Woman
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:59:42 PM AEST
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Dear Mr. Turkel
Words in the dictionary simply don't count.
The word gay used to mean happy and dancing about! No more!
The same with wench....in this generation....the good part of it walked out the door....If you're called a "Wench" now days...deplore! The caller will be knocked to the floor! You simply have to keep up Mr. Turkel with the times, and be very careful what words you use in your rhymes!
Thanking you,
lovingcritters
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Re: The Importance of Woman
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 02:24:06 AM AEST
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| sweet and dreamy:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Importance of Woman
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 03:07:54 AM AEST
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Hi norm,
this is simple the best i like this alot.keep up the good write.rc. |
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