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Unfinished
Contributed by
Pseudoprincess
on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 10:02:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Well it's sad that it took something like this for me to see
just how much you ment to me
As i saw you standing there laughing with her
I knew right then I messed up for sure
I'm sick of trying to make everyone else happy
It just makes me become all sappy
Well it's easy to see that you've moved on
I feel so alone now that you're gone
Becuase of everyone else i let you go
It hurt me so badly but I didn't want it to show
You were the Best friend a girl could of had
I can't believe how fast it all disappeared, my bad
You said you cared and you'd always be there for me
I guess I was wrong to believe you cause you aren't hearing my plea.
For three years you were my best friend
but in a matter of days that all came to an end
I often sit and think of all the times we spent together
I then realize, though i never told you, my feelings for you were pure
I feel so alone now, I have no one to turn to
I don't know if you are playing it safe or you just really have no clue
I understand I hurt you when I told you we could be no more
But it also hurt me because my heart too, tore
Though i wish we could go back to what we were
If we can even be half of what we were i'm not so sure
Copyright ©
Pseudoprincess
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2003-12-09 10:02:08]
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Re: Unfinished
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 10:20:10 AM AEST
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| Wow... This was an incredibly heartfelt poem. I enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Unfinished
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 11:22:47 AM AEST
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| awww sad lots of feelings in this hope it all works out for you |
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Re: Unfinished
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by GoodGirl on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 11:21:51 PM AEST
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| Very unfortunate. All I can say is everything happens for a reason. Good luck. And good write. |
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