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What I Need
Contributed by
MisterRight
on
Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 07:34:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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-- What do you need? --
“Family, what a wonderful thing.
Though I love them so.
Happiness they can’t bring.”
-- What are you looking for? --
“Surrounded by great friends.
Always by my side to help.
But this heart they can’t mend.”
-- How about in your future? --
“Set myself countless goals.
Fulfill them I will try.
Though they won’t complete this soul.”
-- Is there anything you want? --
“Money, it is a desire.
It may make life more comfortable.
But me, it will never inspire.”
-- There must be something more. --
“Health, I’m told is good.
And it should be what I wish for.
If I had what I need, I would.”
-- Tell me you want life’s luxuries? --
“Do I need cars, boats, and toys?
Entertain me they surely will.
But can they bring me life’s joys?”
-- Maybe you’ll enjoy a good trade? --
“I need a steady career?
I’m sure that’s nice to have.
But will it take away my tears?”
-- Want some place to live? --
“How about a beautiful home?
Does it come with someone to love you?
Because I’m here all alone.”
--Do you need a companion? --
“Yes, but there’s only one I want.
She did not want me
And memories of her still haunt”
-- So, then she is what you need? --
“Yes, I need her by my side.
I need her here every day.
To fill the emptiness inside.”
-- How was life before you met her? --
“It was hollow then too.
When she was here I was whole.
Now, I don’t know what to do.”
-- Is there nothing that can replace her? --
“You’d better watch what you say!
She’s like a snowflake, one of a kind.
I’ll need her till my dieing day.”
-- What are you trying to say? --
“That she is all I need and ever will.
I have all these other things.
And I’d give them up for her still.”
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MisterRight
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2002-08-28 07:34:14]
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Re: What I Need
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by Speechful_P0et on
Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 08:36:21 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this alot..very deep write...may all your dreams come true for you. |
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Re: What I Need
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by Clarity on
Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 09:24:22 AM AEST
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i know what u mean...gotta love those snowflakes. :-)
i guess we just gotta hope that the whole "everything happens for a reason" thing is true. maybe she'll wake up and realize what a great guy u r, or maybe not...but at least u had the experience so when it comes around again you'll recognize it.
there's millions of snowflakes...u just have to weather the storm to find them. |
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Re: What I Need
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 11:52:44 PM AEST
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| thats very good.. very well written.... keep writing |
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