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untitled
Contributed by
infedelity_hurts
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Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 04:08:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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pain, (1)
hurtful, (2)
betrayal, (3)
who did all this? (4)
deceit is your way, (5)
making me believe you, (6)
wanting to believe in you, (7)
tears dampening dry river beds, (8)
on the vast plains of my cracked cheeks, (9)
pucker up, kiss me hard, leave me alone, (10)
leave me form tears for you with no sound, (9)
composure never comes for me, (8)
let me continue breathing, (7)
it has been irregular, (6)
i need someone new, (5)
to wash away, (4)
these tears i, (3)
cry for, (2)
you... (1)
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Re: untitled
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 04:13:19 AM AEST
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omg!!! wow..that i slike soo damn good..for a first-timer in structured poetry its awesome
could never be able 2 do that...
i stil have trouble with haikus and tankas..
wow
awesome!!
keep it up!!!
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Re: untitled
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by keilajo on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 04:33:11 AM AEST
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| Very well written |
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Re: untitled
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:06:03 AM AEST
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WELL DONE
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Re: untitled
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 11:05:05 AM AEST
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creative write here
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Re: untitled
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 06:15:15 PM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! this was outstanding in everyway! For you first try it was daring and well written....fine job well done!
lovingcritters
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