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Tears of Acid
Contributed by
kittyjade
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Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 03:31:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Her tears of pain,
Blister her fair skin.
Like acid of hate,
Because she's not thin.
Her eyes are blue,
Their eyes are cold.
They burn into hers,
And no one was told.
More each day,
They made her cry.
And more each day,
She wished she'd die.
That very same day,
She told them good bye.
And tied the rope,
Round her neck really tight.
The last tear had fallen,
Of her hurt and pain.
And no one will ever,
Hurt her again.
Copyright ©
kittyjade
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2003-12-09 03:31:58]
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Re: Tears of Acid
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 03:58:12 AM AEST
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i was diggin it until you used the word 'really'
takes a *lot* of power away... |
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Re: Tears of Acid
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by keilajo on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 04:36:25 AM AEST
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Mercy!
There is so much pain in this.....written well, and to me the really is only a way of saying more than just tight.
very good write. |
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Re: Tears of Acid
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:25:12 AM AEST
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Very, very sad but good writing!
peace, joy, luv, hugs,
emy |
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Re: Tears of Acid
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 08:26:27 AM AEST
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| heart breakingly sad...people are so cruel....but maybe you've made a few bullys think.....i hope so.....very well written |
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Re: Tears of Acid
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:07:20 PM AEST
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this was great I loved it very sad...
Bobo (Joel) |
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