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Questions of Why
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
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Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:49:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Across the sunset, far away
another world, a different day.
An angel of darkness took my breath
for he robbed my heart with his curse of death.
He took your hand as he led you home,
left me here all alone.
It's not right and life's not fair
I search for you though you're not there.
I hear your voice in the shallow wind
as it blows my way laughing again.
This burning pain of loss I feel
touches my soul and always will.
I talked with God the other day
wondering why he took you away.
Then I made a wish upon a shooting star
sending my love to where you are.
I'm so confused and lost inside,
questions unsure as to why you died.
Yet, it's Gods plans for him to know
I'll find the answers when it's my time to go.
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Re: Questions of Why
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:59:52 AM AEST
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OH this is ssso sad, but written from the soul.
I can certainly relate but not from loose of soul mate but when my parents died.
It's very obvious that u luved them endlessly.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Questions of Why
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by keilajo on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 04:51:20 AM AEST
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I agree with the other comment. This is so sad, but whats important is it is also from the soul. I can honestly say this is one of the best poems I have read on here so far.
Thank you for sharing....keila jo |
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Re: Questions of Why
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by irshprnss on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 07:18:37 AM AEST
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| This is such a sad poem. And in sadness comes great poetry. I am sorry you had such sadness but am glad you wrote this poem. Great Write. |
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Re: Questions of Why
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:12:30 PM AEST
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| awww so sad but so well wrirren |
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Re: Questions of Why
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 01:38:41 AM AEST
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| absolutely beautiful............... hugs n' love nessa |
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