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Feeling Clean
Contributed by
olive
on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:07:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The rain soaked everything that day
pouring in from windows
through bare trees
on my sneakers
and in my hair.
And yet I leaned into it
held my face at a position to
catch it on my eyelashes,
feeling more pure somehow
as each drop fell.
Copyright ©
olive
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2003-12-09 00:07:59]
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Re: Feeling Clean
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by mercedes on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:14:32 AM AEST
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| I agree, feeling the rain on your face is one of the best feelings in the world. Good write. |
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Re: Feeling Clean
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:24:58 AM AEST
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Beautifull write.
You must have been blessed with holy water.
Keep up the great work!
peace, joy, luv, holly water,
emy |
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Re: Feeling Clean
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by JPMcMillan on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 01:55:38 AM AEST
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This poem washed away a lot of stuff for me, thanks!
JPMcMillan |
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Re: Feeling Clean
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by gee on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:34:34 PM AEST
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| I was there with you! I loved the feel of this poem. It was smooth flowing from start to finish and written the way I would like to write. Thank you very much. I hope our paths cross again on another rainy day. |
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