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Forever and a Day
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:07:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I woke up this morning thinking of you
reached for your warmth as I always would do.
Your side of the bed was empty with fold
pillows in place, untouched and cold.
I did not smell coffee, the news was not on
things seem so different since you are gone.
Your sweet smelling scent is fading away
so I cling to your memory in every possible way.
Motivating myself is a struggle to do
hard to see sunshine when feeling so blue.
They say it gets better as time goes by
to look for the good at least give it a try.
Something happened at work today
I started to call you right away.
Sadly remembering I hung up the phone
you were not there, God took you home.
My heart is hurting, my soul cries with pain
got nothing to lose, got nothing to gain.
Time is one asset I have plenty to spare
holding on tight, going nowhere.
I'm looking for good as I have been told
reaching for warmth, yet, shiver with cold.
Darling, I miss you in every way
and still loving you "Forever and a Day."
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2003-12-09 00:07:26]
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Re: Forever and a Day
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:15:16 AM AEST
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| Wow. Wonderful write. I could feel the sorrow and loss. I loved it. |
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Re: Forever and a Day
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:28:49 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your lose. Keep writing as it gives u a vice to ease some of your pain.
Very, very sad but great work!
peace, joy, luv, huggs,
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Re: Forever and a Day
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:33:01 AM AEST
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Oh My, what a precious heart felt write.
I lost my soul mate 32 years ago and I've never gotten over it yet. Don't think or let anyone tell you that you can....you cannot you learn to adapt without them, and time heals the pain....but you never get over not having them.....you just learn to adapt!
I can't imagine how you managed to write such a lovely tribute to him...how did you see through your tears. My heart goes out to you dear....I wish I could take some of your pain. Warm Hugs and please know you are in my prayers,
lovingcritters
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Re: Forever and a Day
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by keilajo on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 04:59:06 AM AEST
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| You write so well, I really look forward to reading more of your poems. |
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