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beat me
Contributed by
hardcoreputa
on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 10:50:51 PM in AEST
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Come and beat me,
I’m a masochist,
Both physically,
And emotionally.
Make me cry each night,
Tears for you,
Start another fight,
Smother the light.
Hit me to show you care,
I’ll take whatever I get,
Just so I know your there,
I like to feel despair.
I’m just a masochist,
So hurt me like you do,
If I told my therapist,
I’m certain she’d be *****.
So strike me today,
I wont leave tomorrow,
I could never go away,
Forced to stay.
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hardcoreputa
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2003-12-08 22:50:51]
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Re: beat me
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 02:02:46 AM AEST
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YOu can feel the pain in this write.. so sorry you have to go through that.. abuse is a horrible thing to endure.. I hope you get away from that monster of a human. I enjoyed reading this yet it is so sad
peace joy and hope
JENNA |
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Re: beat me
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by Menelaus on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 11:04:25 PM AEST
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| So sad to see this-yet thankful, it's all over... |
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Re: beat me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 09:49:34 AM AEST
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im in awe.. you've written a great poem from a terrible situation.. this is so sad..
charlotte x_x_x (afraid_of_fear) |
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Re: beat me
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by kori31 on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:27:20 AM AEST
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| Damn! Definitely one of the best I've read so far......Hope u can get out of that situation soon......stay up.........kori |
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Re: beat me
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by glitter_and_corpsepaint on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 12:24:48 AM AEST
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very painful. i'm sorry that you have to go through that. an amazing write that wrenches the heart.
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Re: beat me
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 07:18:31 PM AEST
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| If he loved you he wouldn't hit you. I could this was a good poem. I just don't like the fact he hits you around and throws you around. He shouldn't but if he does this to you than he would do it to the kids |
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