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For the chance
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 07:03:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Ill cry a tear of crimson red
Ill wish upon a star so bright
Let blood trickle down an eye of stone
For the chance to change my past
Ill follow to the end of reality
Ill start at the begining of dreams
Screaming silence in my ear
For the chance to change my life
Tomorrow is inevitable in your world
Yesterday is inevitable in my world
Ill fall upon a beckoning call
For the chance to change everything
This is my internal torment
A beauty of questionable perfection
Ill wait for my chance
To be a good example of man
You deserve the best that i am
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forever_lonely
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2003-12-08 19:03:14]
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Re: For the chance
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 09:36:49 PM AEST
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| welly put. |
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Re: For the chance
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by ArdRi79 on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:23:29 AM AEST
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| I really like the way you didnt rhyme to hold the poem together and you didnt wander from the theme it gave your words a heavy impact, it gave form to a difficult subject nice work :) . |
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Re: For the chance
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by hawaii06 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:35:58 PM AEST
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This poem is very well written...and I like it a lot...Keep on writing..
Jamie |
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