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you and me
Contributed by
Merry
on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 05:22:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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my eyes torn out
cannot see you
my heart broken
cannot love you
my hands broken
cannot touch you
your eyes blind
cannot see me
your heart cold
cannot love me
your fists clenched
cannot hold me
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Merry
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2003-12-08 17:22:41]
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Re: you and me
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by MissLee on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 05:23:54 PM AEST
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| Very nice merry, I liked it alot keep it up |
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Re: you and me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 06:44:27 PM AEST
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yes, yes, yes. Girl you do it everytime and this time you really hit the mark dead on
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One impressed Drunk
A glass of wine for the lady ,on me. |
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Re: you and me
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by Kie on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 07:56:29 PM AEST
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I felt your words. Well done
Kie |
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Re: you and me
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by Crow on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 08:17:07 PM AEST
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| makes me think of how we can trade love and feelings, or how other things take their place in time.. |
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Re: you and me
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 10:45:03 PM AEST
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| That was simple yet oh so powerful. I really liked it. It meant something to me. |
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