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Hurt
Contributed by
callistonynaeve
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Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 04:52:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Yes I hurt, yes it hurts
But why could I sense hurt in you?
Now I hurt more, before I was just lonely.
Now it is like a knife piercing my heart.
I feel more alone with you here.
Because you are so close, yet so far away.
Out of reach, but not by all, just me.
There is more. More hurt.
Why did you open me like this?
Why did you have to hurt me to not hurt me?
I will not let you hurt me.
I will be happy, I will write the happy and
not the hurt because I know,
I can read too...
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2003-12-08 16:52:10]
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Re: Hurt
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by misstressdistrubed on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 05:07:41 PM AEST
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| I know all too well how you feel , isnt it funny how guys always tell us "I dont wanna hurt, and I wont", and 9 times outa 10 whats happens? they end up hurting us, good write and belive me i thought that every guy was like that but you gotta find the one that is telling the truth when he says that , but finding him is the hard part, i wish you and myself,lol, luck- much love jennifer |
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Re: Hurt
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by loopylou on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 05:50:03 PM AEST
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| somthing all of us girls can relate to....lol....boys!!!.....but eventully you forget about the pain when you relise love is worth the risk |
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Re: Hurt
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 10:11:19 PM AEST
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awesome....i can feel all the passion in your words...really good
although sadly i cannot relate as i am only 12 yrs old and do not know anything about love whatsoever lol...
sorry
but hey, awesome write anywayz... |
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