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what worth has a life?
Contributed by
irshprnss
on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 12:44:59 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Someone tell me where does it end
Where can I turn if not to a friend
Whose shoes do I wear if I run away
Can’t wear my own so why should I stay
Friendship, Betrayal, Love, Hate
Where do we turn if not to faith?
I want to run to where I don’t know
Away from my life where pain doesn’t show
Take me to a land of lollipops and dreams
where love is love and everything is as it seems
Take me from the pain that runs to deep
take me where love isn’t the cause but the relief
Someone take my hand, show me the way
What worth has a life if you don’t want to stay
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irshprnss
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2003-12-08 12:44:59]
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Re: what worth has a life?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 01:42:40 PM AEST
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I can understand these feelings.. sometimes you feel like you wanna run far far away like everything you ever felt was lost.. but there is always hope.. great write
peace and joy
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Re: what worth has a life?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 04:21:48 PM AEST
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Excellent write...
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Re: what worth has a life?
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 07:47:24 PM AEST
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I liked the write. Ecspecially these lines.
'Away from my life where pain doesn’t show
Take me to a land of lollipops and dreams
where love is love and everything is as it seems' |
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Re: what worth has a life?
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by eternal_sorrows on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 06:10:21 PM AEST
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| I really understand your feelings. This is a super write. I love your meter and style. This is a great write! |
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Re: what worth has a life?
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by desertrose on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 06:49:30 PM AEST
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You are worthy of love because your beautiful you and everyone is worthy and someday you will have that love :)
Nobody has the right to make you feel worthless without your approvale :)
I know I spelt that word wrong my spelling at age 34 so sucks lol
Rose
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Re: what worth has a life?
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:57:20 PM AEST
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Beautifully described emotion! I know exactly how you feel.
Why do we have this yearning, I wonder? Do we yearn for something that is?
I believe it.
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