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Loneliness in my Heart
Contributed by
maria_mendonez_ibardolas
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Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 12:29:22 PM in AEST
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Loneliness in my Heart
All alone by myself
In the silence of the nite
Only me and no one else
No one there to share my moments of sadness and laughter
How sad life is for me?
Thou people are around
How can’t they feel?
Your sadness and longing for your aching heart
Unaware of my needs to be loved and cared for
When is the time that I can feel that I exist in your heart?
When there is no more tomorrow to wait and I’m not around
All I can feel is I am alone
Wishing that one day everything will change
Hoping it’s not too late for you to give the love
I need
My loneliness is day and nite
It clings to me wherever I go
It never goes away no matter what I do
Waiting patiently for you to rescue me in this lonely place of my heart
Tears just flow on the sadness of my eyes
There are no more smiles that shows on my face
Only stress, pressure and loneliness is there to see
I just pray to God, that you will
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Re: Loneliness in my Heart
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 01:03:09 PM AEST
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| This poem is so sad&depressing,great work tho! |
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Re: Loneliness in my Heart
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by 13Hopes on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 01:20:00 PM AEST
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Out of nowhere, some strange place. One will come bringing a smile to your face. Welcome them with arms open wide, leave nothing to hide. They will repay every thing you give, how happy you will be, this new life to live.
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Re: Loneliness in my Heart
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 01:45:51 PM AEST
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this is a sad sad write.. but there is always hope.. I learned myself don't love someone in vain or someone who will never feel the same.. very nicely written
peace and joy
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Re: Loneliness in my Heart
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by MissLee on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 02:17:16 PM AEST
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I know how you feel
For this kind of love is so very real
It breaks the heart
From the moment it does start
All those tears
They feel like they take away so many years
All through the night
They fight
To be heard
If he would only say the word
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Re: Loneliness in my Heart
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 07:46:11 PM AEST
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| Good write. I really enjoyed this. It was incredibly sad though... I hope you get through this and are stronger than ever. |
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