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If Only
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 11:45:03 AM in AEST
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If only I could reach out and touch you...
Though,It would be enough just to watch from a doorway
Through the silence,to hear your breathing...
It would be all I needed...
To sustain me,and hold me
Where dreams escape and memories awaken me
If only my wanderings were not in vain...
Coming full circle,returning to the same emptiness
Secret vows made...
To never pass this way again
Yet in the shadows,your heart stands
Walks to me and takes my rigid breath
Returning to me,the gift of sighs
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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Re: If Only
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 12:10:28 PM AEST
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My dear loving friend, i felt this one too!
For when a wonderful love is lost to you....
You mourn so deeply, and thorougly,
you feel every emotions possibly even revelry
No one can fill the void but you.
Accept your fate, and help your crew.
Stay busy, and in time...you never get over,
just learn to adjust.
Sharon I even got mad....yes, raging mad...because I was so sad...mad at him because he died...I know that sounds like suicide...but it really did help somehow...Drs. now days say it'a just normal, not formal. You feel every emotion there is to feel
I'm sorry you are so blue my dear, wish there was something I could do?
This poem was precious....and in touch with you heart's bleeding &breaking with sorrow, tearful write.
Warm hugs and love,
ConSue
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Re: If Only
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 12:11:25 PM AEST
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My dear loving friend, i felt this one too!
For when a wonderful love is lost to you....
You mourn so deeply, and thorougly,
you feel every emotions possibly even revelry
No one can fill the void but you.
Accept your fate, and help your crew.
Stay busy, and in time...you never get over,
just learn to adjust.
Sharon I even got mad....yes, raging mad...because I was so sad...mad at him because he died...I know that sounds like suicide...but it really did help somehow...Drs. now days say it'a just normal, not formal. You feel every emotion there is to feel
I'm sorry you are so blue my dear, wish there was something I could do?
This poem was precious....and in touch with you heart's bleeding &breaking with sorrow, tearful write.
Warm hugs and love,
ConSue
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Re: If Only
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 12:17:15 PM AEST
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| Wow hon. I really liked this one. It was moving and touching. Made me sigh heh. The last lines really got me the most. |
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Re: If Only
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by shelby on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 12:47:13 PM AEST
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beautiful
michelle |
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Re: If Only
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 01:48:56 PM AEST
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It is heart breaking to love in vain.. this poem is very touching and i enjoyed it very much
great WRITE!!
JENNA |
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Re: If Only
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 04:14:35 PM AEST
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Awwwww
((((((((((((hugs)))))))))))
Jenni |
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Re: If Only
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by Zee on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 05:04:06 PM AEST
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Beautifully Expressed!! I feel it seems!!
Zee |
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Re: If Only
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 07:19:42 PM AEST
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I guess I am reading this differently than the others. Could be the booze, but it seems to me to be a love found poem, not a love lost poem. The heart walks to you to give you sighs of happiness, not of torment. Either way it is beautiful.
the Drunk
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Re: If Only
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by eternal_sorrows on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:10:40 AM AEST
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I love your imagery here and your words are clearly understood. Great write!
ES |
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Re: If Only
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by Merry on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 04:42:10 PM AEST
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love lost? love found? love contemplated -
a beautiful write - you always give us something to think about.
merry |
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Re: If Only
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:38:51 PM AEST
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The gift of sighs is a very nice gift, indeed and you are fortunate to have been given this gift. Great write, as always... thanks for sharing and keep posting.
P.G. ;-) |
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Re: If Only
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 11:33:54 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Keep your hope up. Light will come.
Blessings
Andrew |
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