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a symmetry of woven silk
Contributed by
infedelity_hurts
on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 03:46:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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flash me a smile
keep me alive
you think i don't know
now i dare you to lie
i've been trapped
fused by the false hope
that you weren't lying
when you said "i love you too"
why do matches made in heaven
always end up, trashed in hell?
you planned my demise
as perfectly as you spun your web
your words are poisonous
the poison pulses through my veins
paralysed by your lies
blinded by what i want the truth to be
and you keep the poison pumping...
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2003-12-08 03:46:25]
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Re: a symmetry of woven silk
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 02:05:51 PM AEST
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this is a very good write .. i liked how you expressed your feelings of beng betrayed.. its a very good write.. I enjoyed reading it.. very well said.. reminds me of soemthing I would write .. I like your style of writing
peace joy and hope
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Re: a symmetry of woven silk
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by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 02:15:19 PM AEST
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Very gracefully done, for lack of a better term. I just love the way you phrased things: "why do matches made in heaven / always end up, trashed in hell?" and the like. Nicely done.
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