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Butterflies
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 10:03:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Butterflies everywhere
flying along with the
summer's gentle breeze
fluttering wings
all different shapes
sizes and colors.
Floating around from
flower to flower
what a radiant color.
Butterflies land on
noses of playful children
trying to catch them.
The calm air
takes the butterflies
by surprise as they
softly sway to the
grass lying beneath them.
Wings spread open
butterflies get ready
to take off, so they
can float along with
the summer's breeze
once again.
Written Dec.1/2003
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2003-12-07 22:03:11]
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Re: Butterflies
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by Cora-Windover on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 10:11:15 PM AEST
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| pweety! I love children, I am one =^..^= well, sometimes I feel like a two year old, and sometimes I feel 30... anyway, I like the poem. Some of the breaks are a little sudden, and a different place would probably flow better. Adios, and kudos! ~Coa Windover |
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Re: Butterflies
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 11:02:44 PM AEST
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Oh Cythia, this is a very special poem....it's light refreshing, and wonderfully worded. I too love little children....you made it quite clear in my mind what was happening. I could see it all in my Mind's Eye, and I was simply delighted. What a mighty fine poem.
Thank you for sharing dear....
lovingcritters but I love children more
ConSue |
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Re: Butterflies
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 11:03:35 PM AEST
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| dearest cynthia, as i sit here in winter, remembering butterflies on my roses, beautiful images come to mind within this lovely poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Butterflies
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 06:54:09 PM AEST
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| That was very calm and serene. I liked it very much so. |
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