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land of betrayal
Contributed by
loopylou
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Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 04:41:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
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how are any of us meant to trust
whilst we are sitting on a world that
threatens to erupt?
how can we close are uncertain eyes each night?
do are dreams not haunt us?
am i alone when im afraid to turn my back?
life is always their fightng an attack
how can i rebel against the blind fold
when it grips my vision so tight
am i the only one shaking?
i canot fight alone
i cannot live alone
i need a friend
but i live in the land of false smiles
corridors that just lead you on
why are people the way they are?
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loopylou
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2003-12-07 16:41:58]
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Re: land of betrayal
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by Jacquelynne on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 04:52:53 PM AEST
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| people...aaarrrrrggg. I feel you. |
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Re: land of betrayal
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 08:57:53 PM AEST
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A land of false smiles, eloquent and so true.
Truly enjoyed by
the Drunk |
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Re: land of betrayal
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 10:33:51 PM AEST
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Sad but true people suck....
THE WIND.... |
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Re: land of betrayal
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 12:26:32 PM AEST
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i think the world of your lines here, "but i live in the land of false smiles/corridors that just lead you on" this poem is filled with vivid images, love it:) hugs n' love nessa
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