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Follow The Dream
Contributed by
LiveTheDream
on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 11:07:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I had a dream that flew away
But then I found it again
It ran away, drove away
But still I found it again
It got swept away, taken away
But still I found it again
It leapt away, crept away
But this time it decided to stay
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Re: Follow The Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 02:28:46 PM AEST (User
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Short and sweet , beautiful little write.
well done |
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Re: Follow The Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 02:43:10 AM AEST (User
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Interesting... I liked it. |
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Re: Follow The Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 02:24:55 AM AEST (User
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i liked it. it seemed to capture the way we can forget our dreams momentarily. |
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