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NUMB...
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 04:40:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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SOMETIMES
IT'S HARD TO GO ON
WHEN IT SEEMS
THE REALITY
IS THAT THE TRUTH
WILL
FOREVER BE UNKNOWN,
ILLUSIONS ILLUMINATE
I AM SO NUMB
NO LONGER CARE WHAT IS REAL
A TEARDROP
FALLS
EVERYONE DIES,
SOMETIMES
I FEEL SO ALONE.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2003-12-07 04:40:22]
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Re: NUMB...
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by Jacquelynne on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 05:08:29 AM AEST
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| i liked this one. |
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Re: NUMB...
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 05:13:10 AM AEST
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Wow I like this one too. Simple as in length but not simple in meaning. Excellent write.
Emma. |
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Re: NUMB...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 06:12:58 AM AEST
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Safe to say this was a huge down moment for you.
Reflections,realisations,ponderings
Expressed yourself well.
LovingWhispers |
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Re: NUMB...
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 01:37:15 AM AEST
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| Simple and short but written with an odd strength. You do indeed write with an interesting point of view. |
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Re: NUMB...
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 05:40:07 AM AEST
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Looks like I missed one here.
discribed your feelings well here.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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