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TRACE YOU
Contributed by
Baby`Fallen`angel
on
Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 06:33:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
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If your face I could trace
I would use
the softest lines of pastel
fingers,
followed
by the glide of oiled crayon lips
upon your cheeks
and lidded eyes closed.
Draw you
deeply, into me
as one after
another the scales
of my hiding places
fall.
Let me be what you see
unfurled
and I will paint you slowly.
Slowly with the graphite of my nails,
against your skin.
Trace you yes
I will.
So I can become the movement
of the air expelled by
your sighs.
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Baby`Fallen`angel
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2002-08-28 06:33:05]
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Re: TRACE YOU
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 06:23:01 AM AEST
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i like this one, it gave me shivers, just thinking about it
fine job and a great write |
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Re: TRACE YOU
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by NirvanaLotus on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 04:00:23 PM AEST
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| i gotta say that this poem made me shutter. its beutiful, i love the way its written, i love how your words just flowed the right way and how it made you think about the greatest of things. its really beutiful |
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