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Black
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 11:52:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Into the darkness she now walks
Each step she takes alone
She knows her way ,she's been here before
It's a very long way from home
Shivering at the coldness,
In this place warmth cant be found
She's old hand at this,yet cannot dismiss,
Her tears that fall with shattering sound
This darkness has a presence
Too cold and cruel to define
It eats away at your very soul
It blackens your heart and mind
Her body has no resistance
As the wind howls and pushes her on
Upon this wind she hears her name
The darkness won't be long
Until she's totally swallowed up
Within this dark and filthy hole
Falling into nowhere,
Without her heart,mind or soul......
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-12-06 23:52:39]
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Re: Black
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 01:00:15 AM AEST
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Awwww... (((((hugs)))))
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Re: Black
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 03:33:46 AM AEST
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wow dark I loved it even though it flies over my scorched mind...
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Re: Black
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by shelby on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 11:34:52 AM AEST
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so full of emotions I love this
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Re: Black
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 11:36:29 AM AEST
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I have walked that path recently and it always seems no end in sight...Thank God there is light ! And we can find it.
Shari |
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Re: Black
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by Cobalt on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 07:50:10 PM AEST
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| Wow... This was exceptionally exquisitely dark of you. I'm not used to that from you. Very nice write though. |
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Re: Black
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 08:47:24 PM AEST
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A dark masterpiece, your pen seems to know no boundaries. Whatever you write goes directly to the heart.
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Re: Black
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:45:56 PM AEST
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Please try to see the "white" always. It's there, but sometimes it's hard to see. I hope that you're always able to see it with optimistic eyes.
P.G. ;-) |
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