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im gone
Contributed by
ROFiti
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Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 10:34:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The smile I gave you the words I assured you with I lied... I feel pain from you you're my weakness you have the gun pointed at my heart just pull the trigger I don't feel from there anymore these are my last words to you im sorry I ever entered your life im sorry if im not what you expected im sorry if my love isn't enough
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2003-12-06 22:34:34]
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Re: im gone
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by Jacquelynne on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 10:40:17 PM AEST
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| i really like this, i connect totally. There is some one that i feel draws from my strength, just to fulfill their own needs, take advantage of me...pm me sometime. |
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Re: im gone
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 05:50:32 AM AEST
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Good write, short but full of emotion.
Emma. |
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