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first storm
Contributed by
Merry
on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 08:54:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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cold bite on my cheek
pale winter skin
reflects light
into darkness
what cold kiss
startles senses
not yet awake
to this brittle season
hark the herald
there is only silence
the cooing of wind
down the chimney
the rust of autumn
trapped under snow
crisp to the touch
it is here and now
the winter white
spectacle
arrives in swirling dance
wearing blue gray gown
to stay for months
until we cry no more
huddled into corners
nesting in our beds
to avoid icy cold hands
gmm2003
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Merry
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2003-12-06 20:54:30]
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Re: first storm
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 09:14:33 PM AEST
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Very beautifull storm but couldn't stand all that snow for very long.
Thanks for the visit 2 Enland.
I'm is the USA but we do get plenty of the stuff at times but not too l;ast that long.
Great beauty.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: first storm
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 09:21:57 PM AEST
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| mmmm ill be over with some hot chocolate hehe:O hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: first storm
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 11:34:39 PM AEST
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| AS I LOOK OUT THE WINDOW AT THE BLIZZARD HERE IN NEW YORK I TOTALLY FEEL EVERY WORD OF THIS ONE. |
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Re: first storm
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 12:07:42 AM AEST
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BRRRRR!!! As beautiful as you have painted this storm,the winter there,I am in NO way inclined to see for myself lol
Love the heat!! and its sweltering here Downunder *smiles*
Really beautiful imagery here
LW |
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Re: first storm
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 11:14:57 AM AEST
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This was so real I had to get a coat as I read it. lol The booze tends to thin out the blood you know.. You words move me each time.
the Drunk |
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