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Torchered Soul
Contributed by
harshreality
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Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 06:18:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Incompletion fills my sorrowful heart,
And I feel so numb...
I don't understand how this happened;
Where did it start -
What have we become?
My mind is filled with unanswered questions -
I can't help but wonder,
What could have been.
If time heals the pain;
That effect ...... Has yet to begin!
I look back in disbelief,
Over my unfulfilled destiny.
I cannot comprehend -
The cards that I've been dealt....
Always thought you'd be here
Next to me!
Somehow life stood in the way,
But it was too late to break my fall;
Every bit of it so painfully felt.
Alone in bed at night I pray ...
How long will this aching last?
Destined to love you,
Therefore destined to lose...
My soul will be forever torchered by our past,
Devistated by the completeness I've been refused!
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harshreality
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2003-12-06 18:18:11]
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Re: Torchered Soul
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 08:46:03 PM AEST
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Wow!
Very moving!
u reach out and????
Sad but so much a part of us all in one way or the other.
One can see the pain here but it also shows much healing where it counts!
Your shock of reality is very moving!
Hang tuff and keep writing these powerfull works of art.
peace, joy, luv,
emy
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Re: Torchered Soul
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 09:33:50 PM AEST
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| ohhhh so moving, big hugs n' lotsa love, nessa |
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Re: Torchered Soul
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 09:39:14 PM AEST
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| How sad yet so beautifuly written. I really liked this. |
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Re: Torchered Soul
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 06:04:25 AM AEST
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Brain McNight...
This was absolutely awesome. I FEEL this. I feel this. Yes I do feel this. Awesome write. Thanks for sharing this. Loved it. All the best.
Emma. |
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Re: Torchered Soul
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by hardcoreputa on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 11:11:15 PM AEST
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| you write some really great poetry. this one is so filled with emotion, i look forward to reading the rest ~Apryl |
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Re: Torchered Soul
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:13:09 PM AEST
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| im pretty you understand what im going through but i have one question is this about the same guy? |
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