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Contributed by Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 02:49:03 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

can i steal love?....can i do that?...
i cannot bring myself to try..
someone please stop me now
as i have lost my destination

my sight blurred and my mind numb
please open my eyes please let me love
i crave
i yearn
i plead
and yet i get nothing

have i been awful? have i been rude?
why so horrible...where is the truth?
show the light on my shadowed world
so that i may see again.

so tired of this
a constant whirl
all i ever think about, i just wanted release
i scream and get nothing
i ask and get nothing
i will soon die and have nothing

cant breathe...thoughts crazed and hell bent on making me scream..how i crave to scream!
yet i stay silent in this empty body...
emotion long abandoned, left with a fake outlook
nothing is real anymore
pain isnt a release anymore
what am i to do?
see if my sword is a good substitute for this razor?..will i feel then?..

such an idiot...to think i could lie and have everything
i almost did though..messed it up too soon
i should have known my luck..
i should have known by now..

i cannot hide my soul forever
nobody should keep this burden, this hurt
yet nobody will listen
so i just sit here.....waiting....

Copyright © Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre ... [ 2003-12-06 14:49:03]
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Re: crimson (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 03:11:34 PM AEST
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Ouch how I can relate to this. You write very well. If you need someone you can pm me. I think this was a very good write.

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