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Looking to the Sky
Contributed by
Contralogicus
on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 12:09:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Clouds moving fast,
From another day,
Running from the pain.
Clouds from the past,
Bring souvenirs from far away,
In the form of rain.
Clouds synthesizing,
Merely parts of a larger whole,
Uniting and dividing.
Clouds are rising,
Above the mists of the soul,
Slowly subsiding.
Clouds fall asleep,
Drifting unconscious free,
Descending deeper.
Clouds like thoughts seep,
Through the cracks, quickly flee,
From the sleeper.
Copyright ©
Contralogicus
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2003-12-06 12:09:16]
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Re: Looking to the Sky
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 12:42:32 PM AEST
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wow.... this is such a beautiful, asbstract picture of dreams.... I really like it. The rhyming isn't too "storybook/Dr. Seuss" type rhyming, you know what I'm saying? It's great. I really enjoyed reading this.
God bless,
Ellen |
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Re: Looking to the Sky
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 01:04:00 PM AEST
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| I loved the wording of this poem. I loved how it works together as well. |
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