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365 days
Contributed by
Hanno
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Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 04:46:09 AM in AEST
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As the long shadows close,
I do not know 'who goes',
I try to sleep on the ground,
not knowing where there is going to be another round,*****!!!!!!!!!
a twig breaks during the night,
I lie here in complete fright
waiting for what ever may come,
trying to cope,just me and my gun.
For anyone who has been in a war zone.
Copyright ©
Hanno
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2003-12-06 04:46:09]
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Re: 365 days
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by Hanno on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 06:17:27 AM AEST
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The reason this poem is called 365 days as that was a tour of Viet Nam.Just to clarify.
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Re: 365 days
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by SkYYBLu on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 10:19:41 AM AEST
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| Very cool poem! Keep it up. |
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