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what do u see
Contributed by
lessa
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Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 11:06:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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when u see me what do u see,
and 18 year old, cute, pretty?
when u hear me what do i say
repecful things? kind things? sweet things?
when u get to know me what do u expect
and angel, a thinker, a smart kind girl?
i have found in my short time alive
people hate me
the real me
the tru me
i warn and warn u
y dont u belive me
i am no deamon to say the least
but i am a *****, a jerk, a lozzer inside
i am not a woman like no otehr u see
i am still a person, not perfect, no even pretty
when u see my eyes flash red
my anger swelling up and ramageing like hell
do u still see the cute girl
the pretty, thoughtful, 18 year old girl?
i am not who u think i am,
i am a mask a thousand years old
worn by the girls, who were like me before
the ones who knew better then to trust and let go
you people caused me, then run when u know me
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2003-12-05 23:06:04]
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Re: what do u see
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 02:25:03 AM AEST
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| Interesting write. I liked it though. |
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Re: what do u see
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by whisper-of-night on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 08:14:18 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem, these lines are classic!!!
'i am a mask a thousand years old
worn by the girls, who were like me before
the ones who knew better then to trust and let go
you people caused me, then run when u know me'
I don't know you girl, but then I would like to see the person in you, if you let me...... |
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