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When i met you

Contributed by lessa on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 10:19:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

instantly i met u and knew something was different
for a moment i lost my footing
my legs were jelly
my mind reeling
your eyes searched over my body
my eyes looked over yours
a smile slowly played over your sweet, sweet face
i think one came over mine to
i couldn't help it, u did something to me
damn u, how could u, now i know i will have feelings you
something about the way u moved and felt as u walked beside me
damn it, god ***** damn it, i knew it, u were wonderful, the person i wanted, i looked and looked for something wrong with u, i see the small things but
as your hands laced into mine, and our kiss made me feel faint i knew it was right
you are more then i hoped for, better then my dreams,
how could u be, now especially.
i'm not a good person, nor a good woman, yet u seem to make me feel like a perfect angel
Hold me again, tell me again, tell me sweet things, i hope someday u will mean u love me.

Copyright © lessa ... [ 2003-12-05 22:19:24]
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Re: When i met you (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 11:36:26 PM AEST
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Very interesting romantic poetry cause at first you didn't wanna like them...but I can definately understand this. You may know their bad traits but that still won't deter you from loving them. This was a good interesting write and I hope all goes well with this for you. Take care.

Emma.

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