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time to rest
Contributed by
putteragain
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Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 06:41:30 PM in AEST
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I have to go and rest my mind
Leave this ache far behind
Rest this body heart and soul
Life has just taken its toll
I say to you my friend my love
Ill see you soon in heavens glove
michelle
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Re: time to rest
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by juliette on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 06:58:31 PM AEST
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So short and yet so poignant - Good write!! Thanks for sharing!
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Re: time to rest
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 07:06:06 PM AEST
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hang in there dear friend,
its not yet the end,
tomorrows a new day!
for happiness to come your way!!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: time to rest
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by norm on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 07:50:31 PM AEST
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Without wasting a word, you told it all.
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Nessa's right,.. to give up now,
You cannot tell exactly how
Tomorrow's day will come anew,
With happiness and joy for you...
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Re: time to rest
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 12:57:51 AM AEST
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Very sad but good writing!
hang tuff, my friend!
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: time to rest
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 02:12:51 AM AEST
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| That was really good. I liked it a whole helluva lot. Really nice write. |
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Re: time to rest
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 01:49:27 PM AEST
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The thing about life
when you get ill
you have to swallow
a bitter pill
So get it down
with a whisky "wetter"
then go to bed
you'll soon feel better
If it doesn't work
and ease the pain
try the dose
once again
This time try
a bit more whisky
double malt
will make yo frisky
bob |
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