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When all hope seems lost
Contributed by
floo
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Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 05:30:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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When the waters rise too high
When the winds become to strong
When it seems you won't make it
I remember... Oh! How I remember
My past... memories coated with you
Remembering my feelings... my love
Remembering the sea of tears, for you
The conflicting emotions...
The sleepless nights and endless dreams
The incessent pain and wishing
But now... the sun has rose
Dried away the tears,
Calmed the destructive storm
When all hope seems lost... or is it?
Copyright ©
floo
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2003-12-05 17:30:45]
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Re: When all hope seems lost
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 05:38:55 PM AEST
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| well done, your right, never lose hope:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: When all hope seems lost
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 02:37:19 PM AEST
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| The problem with hope is that it is always out there...be careful in pursuing hope for sometimes it is an aurora. It seems to be but is not there. Why not just give up and go another direction...for if you follow hope it will always be there...but the problem is the solution might not be waiting behind the hope of your salvation. |
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