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as you sing to me...........
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 02:40:53 PM in AEST
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oh, sing me sweetly deeply,
from the morning of my tomorrow,
your serene voice so dear, as songs to me you sing,
soothingly embracing my heart, sweet happiness your laughter brings,
as we live within' our shared universe in the land of the midnight sun,
my eyes begin to close, you watch over me all night, long hold me tight.......
my darling you are heaven sent, you make my soul contented,
your love is all that i need, i always will want you around,
we've walked this road before, you and i, each whispering a name to the sky,
waiting for love to come along, back when we didn't have a song,
like flowers need the rain to bloom;
we need each other like hot thirsty quenched day,
for while with you across the sea, this wistful side of me you've seen,
our love in this beautiful world, night and day, we ever find life an earth's bouquet,
for all that we will be, i love you,
each and every day....... sweetly, as you sing to me:)
*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*
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Re: as you sing to me...........
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 02:51:45 PM AEST
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I get the impression you like this guy a little. Could be I just had too much to drink again. lol This was so loving and a realization of a dream come true it would appear.
Very much enjoyed
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by doug on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 03:20:48 PM AEST
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this is just stunning, amazing , i wish i could write like this. walk in peace and happiness
your friend doug |
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by MissLee on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 04:13:43 PM AEST
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| AWWW that was NICE , good job!! |
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by Putteragain on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 04:53:06 PM AEST
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Nessa,
this is beautiful
hugs
michelle |
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 06:26:08 PM AEST
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Awww Ness...I hear the song in your heart!! And..I can feel your excitement.... loved this..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: as you sing to me...........
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 06:54:41 PM AEST
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Yummeh!!! (I've upgraded from Yum!! lol)
This is just a gorgeous expression of love,devotion and tenderfness.I anyoe deserves to be so happay at soul with their heart dressed in smiles..its you my dear sis.
Just wonderful feelings here.
*smiles*
Huggers and moosh
roo girl lol!!!!!
Pssst... I will email you later today..so much to tell you.. ;)
Keep smilin and love love love!!! |
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 06:56:06 PM AEST
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Yummeh!!! (I've upgraded from Yum!! lol)
This is just a gorgeous expression of love,devotion and tenderfness.If anyone deserves to be so happy at soul with their heart dressed in smiles..its you my dear sis.
Just wonderful feelings here.
*smiles*
Huggers and moosh
roo girl lol!!!!!
Pssst... I will email you later today..so much to tell you.. ;)
Keep smilin and love love love!!!
If this posted twice,,,sorry hun.I had type-o's everywhere :P |
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Re: as you sing to me...........
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 10:40:21 PM AEST
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so very lovely I am happy for you
Shari |
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 12:17:36 AM AEST
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Wondrous write from the heart.
I'm so happy for you and your friend.
i hope this will all end in a love for all eternity
Your loving words are simply touching and sets your love free!
lovingly
ConSue |
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 01:05:27 AM AEST
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Very lovely and romantic. :) All the best.
Emma. |
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 03:38:46 AM AEST
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| Love is in the air ... and definitely surrounding you as these words convey ... beautiful write Nessa .... Jan |
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by venkat on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 05:39:34 AM AEST
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| wow..very very beautiful.. venkat |
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by Zee on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 03:59:27 PM AEST
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This looks straight from the heart!!! Its so warm, beautiful & heart touching!! I wish I had this much skill in writing!!! Well done!
Zee |
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 04:41:54 PM AEST
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woa, now THAT is a poem! very beautiful...very sweet...very romantic...very awesome! and im done with the word "very" now =)
great write!!! |
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 10:45:47 PM AEST
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Awww, this is such a lovely poem Ness.
*S*
I love the flow of it.
It's beautiful.
I don't know if I'll ever get a poetry book published.
*sad*
I'm going to have to read some more of your writes.
Keep penning my friend.
*S* |
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 12:18:33 PM AEST
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Delightfull, as always................
bob |
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by eternal_sorrows on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 01:00:42 PM AEST
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Beautiful, absolutly gorgeous imagery! Well writen from the heart!
es |
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 03:00:47 AM AEST
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Hi ladyfawn,the only way i can say this is that,its good to the last word.
you express you self very well.i like this.rc |
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Re: as you sing to me...........
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 07:50:04 PM AEST
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Very pretty. I like it.
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Re: as you sing to me...........
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:17:47 PM AEST
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| .....in the land of the midnight sun........wow......your work is so calming and ethereal........... |
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by jme on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 12:29:40 PM AEST
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| Great write. Expressed well. Love the lyrics. |
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 06:40:41 PM AEST
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This is such a beautiful write Nessa.
*S* Cynthia |
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 08:17:14 AM AEST
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a song straight from the heart, i'm so ahppy for you nessa
hugs
merry |
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 05:11:12 PM AEST
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Awww So Romantic!! its beautiful!!!!!! I'm amazed and happy for you :D:D:D Its perfect!!!!!!! ......wow
Anne :D |
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 08:25:40 PM AEST
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| Wow, Nessa, so beautifully charming, a great piece to hang on the wall, I gave you a 5 star on this one, so very touching, (((( singing ))), you are loved, take care, Val |
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