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The Love Letter
Contributed by
doug
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Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 02:36:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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dear heart... the sky is no longer blue
the robins no longer sing
for God hath taken all the beauty from the
earth and placed it in your eyes
and the mountains... ancient though they
may be cannot remember a time when I
did not love you
the yearning... and the longing is to much
every time I dream of you I wake up in a
fever
the burning... the burning of your touch
haunts me like a ghost from a forgotten
yesterday
I ride tonight... I ride tonight to see you
through darkened fields and forest and
past the blackened lakes
I'll die tonight... if I cannot be with you for
sorrow has overtaken me my eyes are
dull and grave
hang your lantern... outside of your door
so that I may see it and come running to
your side
goodbye my love... I'm forever yours
tonight we'll lay together in the glowing
candles warmth
forever yours...........me
Copyright ©
doug
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2003-12-05 14:36:22]
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Re: The Love Letter
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by loopylou on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 02:45:08 PM AEST
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| wow your poem oozes with feeling im not one for slushy poems but yours was so good i made it a exception. your very good at coming up with new ideas and using descriptive langauge......awww very sweet and cute.......good write |
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Re: The Love Letter
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 03:13:00 PM AEST
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| breathtakingly beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Love Letter
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by juliette on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 04:14:31 PM AEST
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Adorable!!! This is so sweet - sappy like I like them!! Keep them coming! Thanks for sharing!
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Re: The Love Letter
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by MissLee on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 04:15:31 PM AEST
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| Very nice, I understand , oh do I understand.....good job, well done!! |
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Re: The Love Letter
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 12:22:05 AM AEST
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My Doug this is just lovingly grand.
How romantic, like Romeo and Juliet!
Very appealing, and heartfelt as you can get!
She's a lucky lady....hold her tight, and never let her go!
lovingcritters
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Re: The Love Letter
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by desire on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 03:12:10 PM AEST
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| it is a beautifully written poem, any woman would be proud to be loved like that, for that kind of feeling is so sweet....you are a talent ....slr |
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