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souls mantra
Contributed by
talisman
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Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 01:34:06 PM in AEST
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Breathe in breathe out
Let your fear be the wind in your sail
Believe in yourself beyond a shaddow of a doubt
and do not be afraid to fail
All that is undiscovered in your life
provides for you an oppertunity for learning
All of the pain and all of the strife
is in your soul a fire burning
All is now concealed
but hold your head high and be strong
everything in time will be revealed
and your heart will sing like a bird in song
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2003-12-05 13:34:06]
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Re: souls mantra
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 03:29:15 PM AEST
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| wonderful! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: souls mantra
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 02:29:52 PM AEST
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| mantra and talisman are the two things often used by earlier civilisations to dispell their fears and in extreme cases to dispell realities by the belief in some otherworldly power. Your poems rings that same tune..keep the faith...and dream...yeh true...but perhaps we must also be ready to face realities....faith could mislead and dreams could drop you into the darkest pit of despair...But anyway nice structure...though...it could really be a mantra. |
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