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Pain that Bleeds
Contributed by
Pseudoprincess
on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 12:57:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Silence
Only tears
As I press the blade
Against my pale skin
Red
The blood flows
From the wounds
Echoing my inner pain
Satisfaction
As I feel the knife
Slicing into me
I only deserve pain
Anguish
As I realize what I've done
I fee accomplishment
As I gaze at the marks upon my skin
Stares
People are horrified
Don't understand why
Neither do I
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Pseudoprincess
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2003-12-05 00:57:15]
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Re: Pain that Bleeds
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 01:09:13 AM AEST
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wow very vivid felt that before totally. The last stanza totally made it when u said u didn't understand why u did it. Ouch that hurts I've been there. Hang in there and keep yer chin up...
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Re: Pain that Bleeds
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 03:17:16 AM AEST
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you should read Midnight Carnival by me, and then perhaps Pleasingly Numb.
i iked your poem. very personal. it made the scars on my arm throb
cheers,
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