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I'M FED UP!

Contributed by AliB on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 06:56:24 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Disappointment, unable to cope
Not worthy of children,a complete and utter dope
No prospects, ambitions,a total waste
No opinions, no dreams, nothing to offer,no taste
That's what you think of me although totally untrue
That is the life that belongs only to you

Yes I can cope but really I have to
Yes it's the life I chose but then what about you
You can make changes, lighten up, be fun
But remember I've two kids and not just the one

Number two,your first grand-daughter,you couldn't wait to see
Number one your first grandson,who actually belongs to me
You mistook him for your last real chance to
Get something right so the credit goes to you

But in the end you're just pushing us away
You won't get what you want at the end of the day
So try to be like normal parents,encouraging me to do well
'Cause if I get any more negative vibes
Then you can all just go to hell

Copyright © AliB ... [ 2003-12-04 18:56:24]
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Re: I'M FED UP! (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 08:02:42 PM AEST
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Sad, but well said in this write. All the best.

Emma.

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