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Tori
Contributed by
AzurePaladin
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Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 06:10:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The opulence of your tragedy
Is Unbearable
Your Throne of Tears and Cushions of Fright
Hold you comfortably, Resolutely
The walls of your chamber Starved, Bone Thin, and Binding
The key to your door is Saccharine and Confidence:
Too much Poison for you to handle.
Copyright ©
AzurePaladin
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2003-12-04 18:10:41]
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Re: Tori
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 07:06:55 PM AEST
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Said with just the right amount of words. I could totally grasp the tone you were trying to set with this. A most excellent write. And well done for just coming out of a writer's block. Don't you just hate writer's block? Just ticks me off....
Ah well. Great write =)
God bless,
Ellen |
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Re: Tori
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 11:00:11 PM AEST
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| very moving piece... because you asked i will say, i believe youve a few more lines within, the harsh raw reality is excellent here, im sorry for you/your friends loss too:) hugs n' love nessa |
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