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Missing him
Contributed by
LiveTheDream
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Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 05:57:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You left here your message
I sit here and wait
A sudden form of breakage
I didn’t even see
Heard how you felt
Began to feel sad
A second went by
My mind went more mad
Imagine you here
Just like times before
Your smile filled the room
And I fell even more
I trace back the moments
To that time that we met
A flicker of sunlight
A ray across my face
An image so wonderful
I didn’t even see
Just how happy and yet painful-
Your presence made me
But now I reflect
On how precious it means
To see your effect
That your leave had on me
Yet pure is the river
And sleek is the snow
That feeling you give me
Just thought you should know…
Copyright ©
LiveTheDream
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2003-12-04 17:57:43]
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Re: Missing him
(User Rating: 1 )
by AzurePaladin on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 06:15:17 PM AEST
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| Wow... this poem hit home with me. Reminded me of my own boyfriend! I like it. :) |
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Re: Missing him
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by EmSal on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 08:11:56 PM AEST
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This was great...I can relate. All the best.
Emma. |
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Re: Missing him
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by MissLee on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 01:23:29 PM AEST
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| Sniff.....wow that was nice..sniff |
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Re: Missing him
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by ToriVeigh on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 04:12:37 PM AEST
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| This is one I can definetely relate to. Great write, expresses the feeling to a tee. |
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