|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
ADMISSION PRICE
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 04:01:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
........the lights illuminate
the glow of her
skin
deep scars are
forming slowly
but
last forever
in her heart
on her mind
always something
on her mind
push it away
using no words
just remember
the lights
made her
skin glow
maybe it
rubbed off
on him
like his
forever did on
her.............
Copyright ©
jaeann
... [
2003-12-04 16:01:14]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: ADMISSION PRICE
(User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 04:28:10 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| we do pay forever it seems, oiled wood always a residue. like this!! Kang'i |
|
|
Re: ADMISSION PRICE
(User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 04:29:25 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I do like this!! Kang'i |
|
|
Re: ADMISSION PRICE
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 05:48:46 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This was a very interesting write. It feels like there was an undertone to it. I liked it. |
|
|
Re: ADMISSION PRICE
(User Rating: 1 )
by AzurePaladin on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 06:12:29 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Well written. Thanks :) |
|
|
Re: ADMISSION PRICE
(User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 06:59:19 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I love this!! Such a neat concept - "admission price" - never thought about it that way but isn't that how it feels? Good write - Thanks for sharing!
juliette |
|
|
Re: ADMISSION PRICE
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 09:37:09 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wow Jaymee your title says it all! Something to think about to contemplate...had never really seen it in that kind of light...but it's true.
Such wonderful poetry, Jaymee...you are so blessed.
Love you,
ConSue |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
