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There you were... again in ignorance
Contributed by
floo
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Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 12:41:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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There you were... again in ignorance
Don't you even realise it?
Do you want to see?
Walking closer... so closer
I hate myself for staring... but I can't stop
Suddenly you look up... looking at me
Can you see it... what I'm showing you
First you smile... but look alittle closer
The smile starts to fade... yes, you see it
Averting my gaze... there's no doubt
And here you are... your eyes on me
My soul aching against it's flesh
It won't stop... I mustn't... just walk on...
Forcing my head down, willing my legs to move
Face burning bright, the heat choking me
Heart crying out to turn round... I musn't
Watching me I speed up the pace
And there you were... in ignorance??
Is it bliss.... maybe...
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floo
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2003-12-04 12:41:10]
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Re: There you were... again in ignorance
(User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 05:04:39 PM AEST
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| Aww that was good, I like your work hon keep it up. |
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Re: There you were... again in ignorance
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by Lessa on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 01:12:24 PM AEST
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| thats a nice write,but you lost me at the end a bit |
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