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for the best
Contributed by
loopylou
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Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 10:35:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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your death
fills me with a sadness
a ache a longing
that brings me guilt
i will miss you
but although i cannot see you
i will not deprive you of my love
it wont just be me who dosent ever stop thinking of you
it will be us
you meant alot to many people
were valued
you were wise
with a dignified death you deserved to die
and with your old age
im glad it didnt take years
just a few crazy months
and many silent tears
you left behind a partner very lonley
somone who will always search for your company
everyday i promise you
you will be missed
but one day you will both be together
and as the guilt eats me up as i type
it will be for the best
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loopylou
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2003-12-04 10:35:09]
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Re: for the best
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 11:58:05 AM AEST
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How very loving how very kind....it's so hard to say goodbye to those we love with all our heart!
This poem was exceptional from the very start....for it shows your love, and devotion even though she's gone...she's be so proud of you....don't feel quilt...you're just human like all the rest....but this poem was the very best!
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Re: for the best
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 12:04:14 PM AEST
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| how very touching this was,its very tough I know! Christina |
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Re: for the best
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by 13Hopes on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 12:21:30 PM AEST
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Great write poem, my thoughts for you...
Cheers
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Re: for the best
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by doug on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 03:00:00 PM AEST
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| a very good poem indeed and hope you write more soon your friend doug |
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Re: for the best
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 03:23:59 PM AEST
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| your poem is so heartfelt and beautiful, im so sorry for your loss......... hugs n' love nessa |
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